Revising Celebration

First graders enjoyed a fun writing celebration from our last unit.  Learning to revise, students made their stories even better than before!  They wrote with a good lead, added dialogue, “show, not tell,” revised by taking away, and then revised their endings.  Last week, first graders read their stories to eager kindergartners in a small writing “celebration.”  Thanks Mrs. Helwig and kids!

Lucas and Gershom  Chase, Anthony, and Noah  Drew, Celeste, and Lailani   IMG_2289  Mackenzie, Gordon, and Callie Ethan, JJ, and Olivia R.  Katelyn  Jeremy, Meghan, and Evan  Aidan, Toula, and Ben

 

 

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